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13 January 2009 @ 03:57 pm
FIC: My Doctor (PG) (TenII/Rose)  
Title: My Doctor
Author: arabian (JenniferH)
Summary: What happened after the TARDIS disappeared on that beach in Norway?
Rating: PG
Word Length: 1,803
Characters: Rose, TenII …
Spoilers: Specifically: Rose, The End of the World, Tooth & Claw, The Impossible Planet, Journey’s End
Disclaimer: I don’t own them; BBC, Rusty, you know, the usual gang
Archive: Anywhere, but do let me know, please
Notes: Eek! My first Doctor Who fic. Thanks so much to avoria and bubbles234 … my awesome betas. Any mistakes are mine.

Anyway, as a full Time Lord, I never really felt an overwhelming desire to have sexual intercourse, not that I didn't think of doing so with you, because I did.Collapse )
Frances: DW - Ten/Rose - quite the kissgoldy_dollar on January 14th, 2009 01:31 am (UTC)
Awwww! I really liked that. Also, yay for kissing! It seems like so few people write kissing well. :D

And it always cracks me up when the Doctor realizes he has HORMONES! XD
Arabian: Dr Who (10) - Kissarabian on January 14th, 2009 11:30 am (UTC)
Ooh, thank you! I knew when I did the rough outline that there would be a lot of kissing, and I wasn't sure I'd be able to manage them all without it sounding repetitious, so I'm glad you enjoyed. Yay!

Well, I thought it would be amusing if we has THIS Doctor realize pretty much off the bat, he REALLY had the hormones, LOL!
starlightmoonlastarlightmoonla on January 14th, 2009 02:16 am (UTC)
Awwww!! This was absolutely lovely! :D Great job!
Arabian: Dr Who (Ten)arabian on January 14th, 2009 11:30 am (UTC)
Thank you. :D
Miss Perkigoth: DW Ten II/Rose Forevermissperkigoth on January 14th, 2009 06:35 am (UTC)
Oh my lord, I love this fic like burning. *bounce bounce* Been a long time since I've read a D/R fic that really got me excited. Thank you!
Arabian: Dr Who (10) - Kissarabian on January 14th, 2009 11:30 am (UTC)
Oh, thank you so much!!! I'm so glad that people like this. I was really nervous about writing it and posting it, but I'm loving the response.

wiggiemomsiwiggiemomsi on January 14th, 2009 07:06 am (UTC)

Beooootiful. Just ... beautiful.

Arabian: Dr Who (Nine)arabian on January 14th, 2009 11:31 am (UTC)
Squee! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!
Kaethel: ten rose kiss closeupkae_nine on January 14th, 2009 07:47 am (UTC)
Awwww. I loved that! Reading this story was my very first activity of the day and now it's put me in a good mood for the whole day. :)))) I loved his whole speech about the urge to have sex; that was so *him* to have to make a whole point out of it. Rose's right: he never shuts it, and isn't that what makes him so loveable?
Arabian: Dr Who (10) - Kissarabian on January 14th, 2009 11:32 am (UTC)
I do the babbling of Ten/TenII so much; it probably is my favorite thing about him, LOL! I'm so glad you liked and that it helped get your day off right. Wheeee!!!
rosewarren: bw kissrosewarren on January 14th, 2009 03:17 pm (UTC)
You've got his voice down perfectly, which is sometimes hard to do (I speak from painful personal experience :)). This was so much fun to read. I loved the babbling and Rose's reactions, and Jackie at the end was a great touch.
Arabian: Dr Who (10) - Kissarabian on January 14th, 2009 11:25 pm (UTC)
Thank you. It's really wonderful hearing that people think I got his voice down. Phew!!!

Hee! I love Jackie at the end. Honestly, I was doing this little scenario in my head and then I randomly remembered that Jackie was there, and imagined her saying that line and THAT'S when I decided I needed to jot this down for a potential fic. And here we are.
JCAPPS, INCOGNITO.thistwilight on January 15th, 2009 06:20 am (UTC)
They're adorable! He's adorable! She's adorable! Jackie's even adorable! *loves* This brings so much joy to my heart! *squees*
Arabian: David & Billie Dancingarabian on January 15th, 2009 11:23 am (UTC)
Aww, thank you so much. YAY!!!!!
helygen: DW_RoseTenSnoghelygen on January 15th, 2009 07:28 am (UTC)
This is adorable, and you've absolutely nailed his voice.

This is quite possibly the most believable of all the beach scene fics that I've read, mostly because you've captured Rose's inevitable conflict and uncertainty and made the new Doctor's responses very true to character, but also because the mention of her first Doctor - the one in the TARDIS - is handled in a way that seems very much in keeping with Ten.2's mindset.

Nicely done.
Arabian: Dr Who (10) - Kissarabian on January 15th, 2009 11:36 am (UTC)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you found it believable because I always approach any kind of fic I write from a logical standpoint (unless it's crack-fic, of course). And for me, Rose would have conflict and uncertainty, BUT just talking/BEING with TenII would make it very clear it was him and so that conflict and uncertainty ould be swept away quickly. And I just had to mention Ten right off the bat because that would be there too, but I wanted a sense of peace and contentment there fore Rose knowing how Ten felt, because now knowing that, yes, this IS the Doctor, she'd believe that he'd know how the other felt.

Thank you again.
Diana: Human Forever - Doctor/Rosebutterfly on January 19th, 2009 04:09 am (UTC)
Aw. This really is quite delightful. I adored all of the Doctor's rambling speeches.

*pets him*

And, you know, everyone realizes just how important his hair is, so clearly all is right in the universe.
Arabian: Dr Who (10) - Kissarabian on January 20th, 2009 02:59 am (UTC)
Thank you; yay! Delightful.

And, you know, that hair comment was a last-minute addition. I don't know what I was thinking to not have gone there automatically, LOL!
Velvet Rain Dropsadriana_is on January 20th, 2009 01:46 am (UTC)
Ok, so I totally missed this the first time you posted it. Congratulations on being nominated at CoT!! Well deserved because this is lovely and you've got Ten's voice spot on!

Well done, Jen!!

killingfrost87killingfrost87 on January 20th, 2009 02:57 am (UTC)
Me as well, but it is lovely!
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Allie O'N: Dr10RoseKiss MRV3000alliesings on January 25th, 2009 12:54 am (UTC)
Awesome! Very hot, and I love the way he rambles as he snogs.
Arabian: Dr Who (10) - Kissarabian on January 25th, 2009 01:04 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I figured he IS Ten, he's gotta ramble! :D
lucyd3lucyd3 on January 25th, 2009 03:06 pm (UTC)
Aw, this is so cute!! Love the way he babbles about kissing her and everything, that's so Doctor. Any chance of a second chapter for further exploring of his new desires when they get rid of Jackie??? (worth a try!)
Arabian: Dr Who (Ten)arabian on January 25th, 2009 04:53 pm (UTC)
Thank you.

A sequel? Probably not, I think this works really well as a stand-alone, but if I get inspired, I may write more in this univers as I do feel comfortable writing TenII and Rose's voices to a degree.

Thanks for commenting.
sunnytyler001sunnytyler001 on February 7th, 2009 09:52 am (UTC)
Awwww!!!! They're so cute!
Arabian: Dr Who (10) - Saidarabian on February 9th, 2009 08:18 am (UTC)
They are, aren't they?! :D
ThroughAnAmberFocus: Rose Ten2 Kissingamberfocus on February 8th, 2009 10:34 am (UTC)
I love this. It made me grin from ear to ear.
Arabian: Dr Who (10) - Kissarabian on February 9th, 2009 08:19 am (UTC)
Thank you, grinning is good. That was the goal! :D
Harpinredharpinred on March 5th, 2009 03:08 am (UTC)
I just found this through the Children of Time awards site and it's adorable!!! I loved the almost total lack of angst.

Wonderful, thank you :D
Arabian: Rose and Donnaarabian on March 26th, 2009 01:51 am (UTC)
Thank you. I'm not a big fan of the angst. I've featured it in longer stories, but it ALWAYS has to have a happy ending of some sort. That's just me. Glad you liked it. :)